I could see a poetry reading on stage , red curtain behind the reader, candles the only light. The shadows move to and fro on the crimson curtain and these words are whispered in a silent room. GREAT visual this one gives!!!
Calibrated in synch with every sense known to us passionate creatures - sight, taste, touch, and sound...shouldn't all of these senses be present, though, when we consummate romance? Paradise reaches zenith, Eileen...
HULlo, Eileen, there went me monitor (and me glasses). Holy smokes, you set the Den aBLAZE!!!! Nothing ugly about it: natural. Honest. Beautiful love, blessed by God. Well done!
Dang, Eileen, you wrote a hot little number here! WHOO HOO!! Well done; I thinks I need a cold shower....Very well done; brava! Love the graphic; pretty!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Damn cool word...(sorry I have not written of late, commenting wise, but 7 day work weeks and 12 hour days make it really hard to come home to much more than to eat, walk Rufuz and go to bed, again) Ed
Truly romantic. I like the play on 'happenis' - didn't even have to re-read, caught it the first time. Reaching paradise - isn't that where we all want to be?
Reaching,
Kathy
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2007
THAT was one exotic and lovely poem from my friend . . . Very good . . .
Reviewed by Stan Grimes (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2007
What a nice place to be.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2007
Between you and Amor, it has been a passionate day. This is lovely, Eileen. Every line a gem.
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A well done treat!
Gina
Love Tinka
WOW!
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Passion explodes in your verses. Bless You My Friend.
enjoyed...
John
Be safe,
Karen
Love,
Sage
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
You really have a way with words. Thanks for a double treat.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Love
William
Love,
Ssuan
Reaching,
Kathy
Love,
Bette