Our Universe Journey
Gray inside grey, overcast sheen in sheer shadows
Void amidst gravity devoid time warp continuum
Wherein minds, one tries to center interpolate
Skeletal skull, cerebral to celestial UniVerse currents.
We occupy an interpersonal sphere in thought processes
UniQue amongst this single spec, bearing humanity prowess
Amid an infinite universe of unknown physical containments
That must be circumnavigated within poet’s temporal lobes.
Science be finite precise, analytical equations, and theorems
Universe be infinite possibilities, it defies logic of predictability
As dimensions: depth, density, size, shape, mass, weight, ect..
What is more intriguing, what lays beyond it, and beyond that.
Within Earth realm, science and probability exists in statistics.
Most of which can be used within our solar system dynamics.
But soon the variables grow exponentially more complex
For instance what is a black hole, where does it go with stars?
Where is the center of our universe, where is Earth within it?
Where is closest edge of our universe, what happens there?
Since the evolution of human kind, we have been explorers
Gone beyond this flat Earth, we have just begun -
Our Universe Journey.
Clever writing.
It's the kind of thoughts that can blow your mind.
Sometimes I wonder if we should just enjoy the night sky
allowing poetry to be the science.
Your poem evokes all of our wonder at the rapid pace we are beginning to understand our universe both large, and small (right here on Earth) in ways never even thought of, 20 years ago. You end the poem with the only conclusion that can be made… Our journey is just beginning to understand, and may be unending, similar to the universe itself.
Ron