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My Country’s Sunrise Melody - Sunset Harmony

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This PEACE, would take strong willed feminine statures like Dolly, Reba, Cher and other stellar women to make this musical miracle happen.

Men are too entrenched in Music Row amid political be made silence. One man that could pull it off, would be Willie, and the outlaw cast.

What do I get for wanting America to unite in a Love song, amid sunrise to sunrise melody strumming sunset to sunset harmony, is to be labeled "Liberal" for thinking America's Miracle, is worth singing praise about.

Is this PEACE a song, of course not, this is thrown together Poetry that is why we have Dolly, Reba, Cher, Willie giving America, Our Love Notes.

Will this get any traction today? You got to be kidding, with so much hate around today. How could Our Country's Star Spangled music - unite US in a Love melody strumming My country banner miracle harmony?

Why do I post - This? Because I be a Fool that Loves the Miracle Flight of Red, White, Blue fluttering alight wind's love song. Stupid I be, stupid I am.

This has so many flaws, but the pain in writing this, makes me leave it alone, or it was destroy what little hope - I have left.

Friday, November 20, 2020

My Country’s Sunrise Melody - Sunset Harmony

This Is My Beloved Country
So come on you (yea) all
Let US join together
Adrift Red, White ‘n Blue
Hallowed Star Spangled melody,
My Country Banner harmony.

Our country was built upon family
Of city slickers and country folks
In Loving Stages that unite US together
Where upon Love we shall - share our melody
Wherein Truth - we share Trust’s harmony.

Short tall thin and wide - we come in all shapes
In every hue and tint, we BEE pure American
That Will that must Stand Up and be counted
Within being unified within these United States.

Our country was built upon, being neighbors
Of city slickers and country folks
In Civilian Stages uniting US together
Wherein Love we do - share our neighborhoods
From sunrise to sunrise Singing
This is My Country melody
Strumming sunset to sunset
Love My Country Harmony

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Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on November 20, 2020

It is a good try with all the right stuff. But it's not lyrical enough. I know that you are trying to give lady songwriters a break, and I agree, but in addition to Willie, there is also Dylan, Simon, McLean, McCartney and others who could do the song justice. In fact, perhaps you could incite a collaboration that came up with something like We Are the World.

Ron

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