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Surfside Memory Remains

by David Lester Young — Read all 1,103 poems by David Lester Young

Did June 24th Full Moon. underground beach sand peak tidal forces to quake, weak (Sandcastle} foundations. It happened right before, the full moon peaked that day.

With global rising tides, are higher underground water levels, under a full moon conditions exerting higher underground water level forces?

Added 'What If Washes Ashore." RIP - Angels in heaven's wake.

Sunday, July 11, 2021


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Surfside Memory Remains

Sea Surf Side tides
ebb and wain sea solemn
saline mist tears
Whence anew
Full moon cycles
condo stood forth forty years
Twelve Stories
withstanding hurricane force
tidal wave onslaughts
Surf side surf
now washes ashore
mourning Wake RIP memories
Strawberry June 24, 2021
full moon moonlight
collapsed residences
Cement decomposing home dwellings
now be grave remain pyres


Dawn onto sunset
begets midnight moon cycle moans
bare mourning dust
Four, eight, sixteen, thirty two, sixty two
 dead amount climbs to unknowns
What were souls standing stellar
fetch timeline’s shoreline wreck fatalities
14 million pounds acuminating
more and more anguish
dust piles onto pyres,
Humanity body bagged
belonging property tagged
resident condo compiled
What brought things together
upon Surfside Strawberry Full Moon –
Quaked
Twelve stories south tower
to ground level
decomposition of Concrete Condos.

What man had built up
amid time Sandcastle seashores
dost dearth crumble
One thirty ~
past midnight
upon strawberry full moon
concrete dye moaned
ChrestView South Tower came down
rumble bye-earth shattering beach roar
Dost ocean wave rhyme extinguished
time taketh awry  -
dye American Surfside
Sandcastle (12) Story Dream

(2)
What If Washes Ashore

What if, what if,
wailing wind's lone Poet,
could write on ocean mist tears,
beside see shores,
moving full moon tide's lines,
upon memorial epitaph tribute
moonlight memory Lit shorelines?

HeArtMosphere Poet



 

Surfside Memory Remains

Sea Surf Side tides, ebb and wain sea solemn saline mist tears
Whence anew, Full moon cycles, condo stood forth forty years
Twelve Stories withstanding hurricane force tidal wave onslaughts
Surf side surf, now washes ashore, mourning Wake RIP memories
Strawberry June 24, 2021, full moon moonlight, collapsed residences
Cement decomposing home dwellings, now be grave remain pyres

Dawn onto sunset, begets midnight moon cycle moans, bare mourning dust
Four, eight, sixteen, thirty two, sixty two, dead amount climbs to unknowns
What were souls standing stellar, fetch timeline’s shoreline wreck fatalities
14 million pounds acuminating, more and more anguish, dust piles onto pyres,
Humanity body bagged, belonging property tagged, resident condo compiled
What brought things together upon Surfside Strawberry Full Moon – Quaked
Twelve stories south tower to ground level decomposition of Concrete Condos.

What man had built up, amid time Sandcastle seashores, dost dearth crumble
One thirty ~ past midnight - upon strawberry full moon, concrete dye moaned
ChrestView South Tower came down, rumble bye-earth shattering beach roar
Dost ocean wave rhyme extinguished, time taketh awry -
dye American Surfside - Sandcasle (12) Story Dream

(2)
What If Washes Ashore

What if, what if, wailing wind's lone Poet, could write on ocean mist tears, beside see shores, moving full moon tide's lines, upon memorial epitaph tribute moonlight memory Lit shorelines?

HeArtMosphere Poet

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



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Reviewed on July 11, 2021
That was horrible! My goodness, I can't think about it!!! I will agree with Ron's review.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 11, 2021
A fitting tribute to those lost their lives at Surfside.

And also a warning that building on the shifting sands of a coastline is inherently dangerous in many ways. While reinforced concrete structures can be expected to last a thousand years, the relentless onslaught at the beach's edge can shorten that lifespan considerably in a few short years several ways.

Ron


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