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Love Locomotion

by David Lester Young — Read all 1,103 poems by David Lester Young

My dream, be it a April 30th Birthday Dream, was to write one song. While I am, a so so Poet; I just wanted to write one insignificant song, to say I did it.

Can this image make "Love Locomotion" in American commotion, with all this Hate emotion scorn in Americans today?

But Today in America, To Be, is naught to be. So Many promises, from mostly female songwriters, who say my words are magic, spells that bursts the bubble, time and rhyme again.

Would Of, Could Of, Should of, bought the Brooklyn Bridge, before The Steal, before Trump bought it.

Have other lines, but had to get this on Internet.

On April 30th, my birthday I having phantom songwriters over, Where their skeletal fingers, dew play bone brittle blues in my dreams.

There are 3 versions so far, may be more. I will try A Capella in my scarecrow voice, then maybe find some musician victim, who is naught afraid to be seen with a Liberal. Now I know how Willie felt fighting Music Row.

Can you imagine if one does "The Steal" and must face this face in court.

I make so much cents that in every word, I go into repeated Bankruptcy.

Can one create "Love Locomotion" upon a Birthday miracle, Naught Too Bee found in America Today, so full of HATE.

Thursday, April 21, 2022


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Love Locomotion (Version 1)


From the first time, I saw you
You have set my heart
Adrift such a commotion,
Fluttering full of emotions
My heart goes into locomotion

I have love’s locomotion
And it is driving me crazy
Driving my feelings wild,
With pitter patter commotion

Every time I see you,
You set into motion
Such ecstatic emotions
Massaging Love lotion.

I have love’s locomotion
And it is driving me crazy
Driving my feelings wild,
With pitter patter commotion

You set every part of me
Feeling them musical vibrations
Where the springs motions
Make a love melody potion
Go into Love’s Locomotion

 

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Love Locomotion (Version 2)


Oh hear thy pitter patter
of my heart going into
love’s locomotion


From the first time, I saw you
You have set my heart
Aloft such a commotion,
Fluttering full of emotions
My heart goes into locomotion

I have love’s locomotion
And it is driving me crazy
Driving my feelings wild,
With pitter patter commotion
That Love Matters

Can you hear
my hearts smatter
Where one feel -
that love matters
For every time I see you,
You set into motion
Such ecstatic emotions
Massaging Love lotion.

I have love’s locomotion
And it is driving me crazy
Driving my feelings wild,
With pitter patter commotion
That Love Matters

You set every part of me
Feeling those musical vibrations
Where the springs motions
Make a love melody potion
Go into Love’s Locomotion

Oh hear thy pitter patter
of my heart going into
love’s locomotion
Saying “I Love You,
"So let us set things (crazy),
Into loco motion"

 

Love Locomotion (Version 3)


Oh hear thy pitter patter
of my heart going into
love’s locomotion


From the first time, I saw you
You have set my heart
Aloft such a commotion,
Fluttering full of emotions
My heart goes into locomotion

I have love’s locomotion
And it is driving me cra~~zy
Driving my feelings wild,
With pitter patter commotion
That Love Matters smatters

Can you hear
my hearts smatter
Where one feel -
that love matters
For every time I see you,
You set into motion
Such ecstatic emotions
Massaging Love lotion.

I have love’s locomotion
And it is driving me cra~~zy
Driving my feelings wild,
With pitter patter commotion
That Love Matters smatters

You set every part of me
Feeling those musical vibrations
Wherein the springs motions
Bear a love melody potion
Going into Love’s Locomotion

Oh hear thy pitter patter
of my heart going into
love’s locomotion
Saying “I Love You.”
"So let us set things so cra~~zy,
Into loco motion"



 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



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Reviewed on April 25, 2022
Oh, do I know what you mean, David! My heart was set into "locomotion" on a track that never had tracks switched. Right on through!!! Yes!!
Write on!!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 22, 2022
Your son certainly has the elements of infatuation and repetition. The hallmarks of young love songs, regardless of the age of the writer. I didn't automatically sense a melody like I often do with rhyming poetry. But that doesn't mean that a stylist singer couldn't belt this one out with some pizzazz.

Back in the 1960s-80s, I believe, a lot of dance songs were hatched. There was one, I believe called, "Do the Locomotion." I looked it up and enjoyed it, especially for its refreshing young lead singer…

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=POWsFzSFLCE

Ron


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