Hi Belle - i love the rough diamond image - i have a few poems about rough diamonds ;) - the smoothness and charm of your poem is in the characters portrayed, and their beautiful expression, tender and tough - is that your or you're at the end there? Enjoyed very much, Nicky x
luv how you developed this poem, La Belle ... its depth, fortitude and sentiment is bolstered by its superb imagery ... the finale is just exquisite ...
Who knew the Wright's had a trunk full of hidden family secrets? Searching for treasure and hidden family secrets is one way to fuel the flames of passion.
Love Tinka
I love this. We are all much more than what is on the surface. Beautifully written.
Be safe,
Karen
Rusty
Reindeer
(((HUGS))) and much love, your Tx. friend, Karen Lynn. :D