he stalks me from the shelter
of a lush, dark forest of lust
and slowly burns me to live ashes
with the fire of his feral eyes
a primal panther of a man
heart wild, breath hot
muscles ripple with each move
as he crouches low and waits
to pounce on my excited libido
and capture me, body and soul
where can you find any shelter
from such a powerful predator
if you should seek to hide at all?
his words smoothly slink through
all the holes of my defenses
bound over the walls of my fortress
primal his presence, swift his attack
we wrestle in the night shadows
and kiss with a fierceness of spirit
only known to creatures of pain
his touch liberates the wildcat
two barbarous, sensual animals
locked in an ancient hold of desire
with bared teeth and claws
that bite to the core of passion
and claw bloody, deep furrows
on the back of civil restraint
for we are not civil... nor gentle
in the shadows where the panther tries
but can never quite tame his mate
Feral coupling of two animals...sensuality of pain and pleasure...sweet are the night sounds of the jungle...you captured it all in this one Belle, love it truly.
Fee
Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk (Reader)
Reviewed on August 21, 2007
Very sensual writing, a pleasure to read your work...Hugs and Love, Peggy
Hey Belle,
Can you share in the wealth? lol, only kidding..I love this primal erotic poem. Wow, you will certainly get the men on the den going with this one...
Peace, sister, and much love and light,
Amber "V"
Like a Bengal Tiger, if enter my domain, I will take all if I please, to fear I will show my claws and my fangs, to challenge my deepest roar, but to kindnes I will show no menace, just protection and a place to hide under my skin.
Georg
Well written Belle - the greed of raw desire, passion wanting possession and the untamable mate - and August the month for moderation too! lol - fine poetry Belle, Nicky x
whoa! just happened to post one myself right abouve you - I better be careful - you sure quite the right rating!
(and music!) hey like the new pic in your bio. Looks great. Your a flame!
A story set in 10 years time where two bodies are found in the river NITH in Dumfries, south west Scotland. One is a blind musician and police informant while the other is Poppy, a young girl. It brings Mark and Carla together with different views i
Carole~
with love,
Ron
Be safe,
Karen
Fee
Wonderful write, and great music. You did again La Belle!!
Ann
Can you share in the wealth? lol, only kidding..I love this primal erotic poem. Wow, you will certainly get the men on the den going with this one...
Peace, sister, and much love and light,
Amber "V"
Georg
(and music!) hey like the new pic in your bio. Looks great. Your a flame!