Art "The Ribbons And The Traps"
By Sergey Marshennikov
Untying My Heart
By La Belle Rouge
With only a stolen glance
from eyes that undress my need
he intrudes so easily into my soul
though not an intrusion
a standing invitation
a perpetual presence
i crave within me forever
i am a hapless, helpless butterfly
who has given up struggling
with an intricate web of desire
accepting the reality, the probability
of continually hearing his whisper
and feeling the caress of his breath
soft and hot against my skin
he and love are forever
tangled together in my thoughts
how can i hope to escape?
his name is a silent sigh in a heart
that can not beat without his love
he continues to be welcomed in
beyond all my fortresses
there is no territory in my soul
he has failed to explore and conquer
we are fools for love, he and i
flesh suffering the insufferable
yet in an never-ending tango of lust
he tenderly unties my heart
as easily as he unties my ribbons
The art of your words is unsurpassed except by your heart and the intensely true love that no other can fathom. I am constantly elevated by your lines which spill from that heart and mind. From here, we can only soar.
Always,
Amor
I am impressed La Belle. This is beyond a shadow of a doubt one of the best you have offered of many outstanding writes. The graphic draws one in like a voyeur in heat and the words stroke the imagination of sensuality until the mind climaxes with the beauty of the last few lines. Very nice...
A truly HUBBA-BUBBA Write, Sexy Thang! Expect to add a few more men to yore harem with this write, all wantin to untie yore ribbons! I like the name of that midi, the be a few that I would like to say FUYU to! LOVE YOU! Sissy SC
Belle, you red headed vixen you! I love this, your passion is unsurpassed here, and what fools we can be for love..but better to love than, to be lonely..
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"
A true Red Head, I can vouch for it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ha! ha! ha!
This poem put me over the coals, tossed me around a few times and keep on lying about coming over.
Georg
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 13, 2007
Man, you can write with such intense passion, you must be a true red head, love Holly
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As is all your writes
Peace be withn you
Love
William
Newfie Hugs, Rose
blessin's LaBella Poetica,
cynth'ya lewis reed
Always,
Amor
Be safe,
Karen
hugs
Fee
Love tinka
Oooolala~got to Love this and I do!
Sensational~Blessings to you,
~Gwendolyn
and palpitations, galore! - Bill
Kathy
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"
This poem put me over the coals, tossed me around a few times and keep on lying about coming over.
Georg
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D