She Was...... (poem) by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on August 3, 2008

Hot. Liz

Reviewed by Timothy writerwanted@hotmail.com

Reviewed on July 27, 2008

Wow, very sexy vibe entwined within. I see your still keeping it real. Keep it up and he will always come home early.

Tim

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on July 27, 2008

Allurements voiced to the naive sailor that from his boat look longingly at the promise island of a smiling mermaid calling.

Georg

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 26, 2008

Wow - music; verse makes for a passionate night indeed. Well done, La Belle! Hypnotic, entrancing invitation -

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Southern Comfort

Reviewed on July 26, 2008

Beware, The Maneater is awake and on the prowl! GRRRRRRROWL LOVE! Sissy

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 26, 2008

In the enchanted forest of his dreams - quite a place to be.

Reviewed by Ed J.

Reviewed on July 26, 2008

very pleasurable reading.

Ed

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on July 25, 2008

The passion potion is delivered! Very sensual and full of wonderful thoughts..
Peace, love and light,
Amber :V:

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 25, 2008

You sure know the way around the passion of a man's mind and the tempatation of his heart. This is lovely indeed.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on July 25, 2008

I like the way you ease into this, Belle. Ah, and the crescendo!
beautifully done (as always). -gene.

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on July 25, 2008

Belle, this drips (in the very best sense) with cool passion, and those final two lines are stunning!
John

Reviewed by Jeff Mason

Reviewed on July 25, 2008

So softly passionate; filled with so much of your deftly-portrayed sensuality. I love the way you gently weave and build your stories. -- Jeff

Reviewed by Kathryn Seifert

Reviewed on July 25, 2008

Very nice. Very sexy. Loved it.
Kathy

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on July 25, 2008

Precisely captures the passionate sentiment of the red cat in his bed...salivating dance of very cordial tongues...knowing the power of your audience giving you wide readership because you use it -quill and sexuality, Belle...each write takes us higher...

Love,
Sage

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 25, 2008

WOW!! Amazing word usage and music, Belle; a stellar combination! BRAVA, extremely well penned!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D