we don’t say goodbye
even when our day ends
after one sun goes down
a new morning begins
we still are who we are
and woven though our tears
a love we can’t forget
for all the searching years
and there are no goodbyes
no tears to fill our eyes
waiting again for you and me
is immortality
we are so much more
than grains upon the shore
more than just a short sojourn
for the lessons we must learn
let love’s tenderness abide
with each remembrance felt inside
some feelings are a mystery
we can only let love be
for eternity
and we don’t say goodbye
no farewell for you and me
no grief, no asking why
in immortality
i ask nothing more of you
you don’t already do
old memories circle round
the newness we have found
i sense your spirit once again
my lover and my friend
and i know you now as then
for eternity
and there are no goodbyes
no tears to fill our eyes
waiting again for you and me
sweet immortality
Such beauty in each line, as TRUE REAL LOVE, is eternity!
Wonderfully said and felt Belle!
No reason to say GOODBYE!
as morarality is the REASON why!
Love this!
TRuth speaks!
WRITE-ON!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Soulful SHEExooo
STay Positive! Love this sweet delicate song!
Reviewed by Mark Chevalier (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2008
Wow! What a beautiful and intricate poem. Filled with love and joy, and laced by the inevitability of separation as we pass on. But you unfold the notion of immortality, the rejoining after this world passes away. Fantastic poem!
Yes, sayonara is the final farewell when departing on opposite directions forever...somewhere there should be a soft whispered welcome on a corner of eternity.
The poem is more than a verse, it is a call.
A beautiful message of never being separated. I think all in-love couples feel this way, and you've put those emotions into words. Even without the music, this poem has a lyrical feel - especially because it repeats at the end with a change. The picture made me grin! What a way to start my day:)
Sheila
Blending Southern Gothic mystery romance, fantasy, theater, dance, music, and flashes of humor, tells the story of a pair of lovers in two separate time periods who find themselves battling an evil fifty years apart.
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Wonderfully said and felt Belle!
No reason to say GOODBYE!
as morarality is the REASON why!
Love this!
TRuth speaks!
WRITE-ON!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Soulful SHEExooo
STay Positive! Love this sweet delicate song!
Best wishes, always,
Mark
Newfie Hugs, Rose
John
Be always safe,
Karen
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Love Tinka
Sandie Angel :o)
The poem is more than a verse, it is a call.
Georg
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Sheila