You're a natural lyric writer, La Belle. This one causes a cacophony of competing tunes to scramble their way outta my brain- each competing to be 'the one'!
Great fun and another aspect of your diverse work.
Love u as always,
Keith
Reviewed by Mark Chevalier (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2008
I've worked on several stories where the protagonist was from the 1930's and 40's. This poem gave me both a lyrical and historical feel coupled to the picture you added. Just as sweet as can be, and from an angle where life was looked at in a very different light.
A great piece of work!
Mark
Oh LaBelle.... everytime you post something....I have to "set it aside" a tad...think about it.... you know... I have this "shy" side when it comes to risque'...duh.... but then.... I end up reading it anyway...alone....and smile...and think to myself.... how cool that she can write with such abandon.... I could never... not about this...but... when I read this one... I thought..."She's bad"....and "bad" is usually good these days...hehe.. lindalaw
Love shoud be fun. Right category you put this one into. It is amazingly about love which is only the greatest thing on earth while we are here. Your writes are very intelligent and thrilling.
Oh this is so cute and lively, whipped cream isn't allowed in my house, it took weeks to get the dumb stuff off the walls Don't ask...!!!!!!!! that's another poem....Great write my friend. Love, Bonnie
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Great fun and another aspect of your diverse work.
Love u as always,
Keith
A great piece of work!
Mark
with us La Belle. Thank you.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
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(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
No one does passion quite like you. Bet there are many willing to be bad, just for you! Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
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Georg