LaBelle,
Well up to your usual excellent standard, this is erotic (of course!) and wonderfully seductive and flirtatious...bewitching. You know how to draw us in and then dismantle us. Love it!
John
Like peeling an onion, it need to go very very slowly...then one will no cry. Now, how can a man do it with trembling hands of lust and fingets acting they are all thumbs?
Don't light the fire if you don't think of roasting him on your coals.
I wrote this novel several years ago, I self published and never had it to sell. I have decided to rewrite it and hope to get it published within a few months for people to be able to buy. I had a few copies and gave them to a few family members and
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"...and the laces unraveled him."
I like the way you presenting the conclusion as well.
Enjoyed your "The Red Corset"
Gwendolyn
hugs
fee
Well up to your usual excellent standard, this is erotic (of course!) and wonderfully seductive and flirtatious...bewitching. You know how to draw us in and then dismantle us. Love it!
John
Be always safe,
Karen
Don't light the fire if you don't think of roasting him on your coals.
Georg
-gene.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.