It was sweet bliss to think of
his arms securely around her
lost in a maze of music
her fingers weaving magic
through his hair
not even air could push between
two bodies pressed so close
barely moving
in a crowded room
where other dancers
faded into the shadows
leaving only one man
and one woman on the dance floor
his hands slowly sliding
below the small of her back
bedroom eyes pleading
firm intentions pressing
against her soft surrender
his whispers in her ear,
"will you?"
her breathless answer.....
6/10/2009 La Belle Rouge
"Poetry, Passion's Flame"
Music "The Dance"
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Reviewed by ~ H (Reader)
Reviewed on June 16, 2009
Beautiful is hardly the right word for this wonderful poem. Holly
I love the heat of the moment of this write that captures a man's passionate angst...also loved how you left the answer hanging in mid air for us to think about...
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fee
Beautiful...I would have given the same answer. This is so vividly picturesque and lets the reader "see" all the movement by thses two dancers around the dance floor. Thank you for sharing.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie.
Submersed was the face in a pink, soft and warm ocean skin exited by love and lust, trying to make every second agonizingly endless until that deep encounter with hot eternity...her answer was right.
Welcome to Hell on Earth, boys.
Andersonville POW camp...
Russell's battle-worn body looked defeated. He was a Union soldier; she was a Confederate nurse. But when Rosa looked into his eyes, she saw pure determination. He looked fo
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Joyce B.
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fee
You master 'the vital moment' effortlessly and with such style and passion.
John
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Karen
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn.
Lin
In Spirit,
Bear
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie.
Georg