come storm with all your fury
and let me feel your power
crash thunder, lightning flash
take me away if only an hour
where hair is whipped by wind
and heart pounds like a drum
as I wade out into wild waves
come dangerous hurricane come
ravished with the feral force
of sensual lover on my shore
come kiss away dry serenity
evoke passion’s rain once more
and let me ride upon the clouds
carried high on your perilous gale
tempest tossed and loved soaked
come now sweet storm without fail
Both provocative and evocative, Belle. As others have said, you conjure the passion so well, whipping up the storm with your invocation and challenge. I can almost taste that sea-spray, feel the whipping winds and hear the deep, throaty roar of the swelling seas in your voice! Now the thunder clap and lightning! The earth moves... !! Love this. Kate xx
The fury of many storms...but which one are we calling, which one mesmerize us to the hypnotic point of offering ourselves to the emotions hurricane and tsunamis of desire?
Storms...they are so many but only one our hearts wish.
My momma always told me
"Be careful what you ask for"
Once it comes
What does it have in store?
Will you be left wanting more?
Or trying to nail down the door?
Belle, I can feel the passion in this stormy write. It is exuberantly wonderful!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 23, 2009
Call me crazy, La Bell, but I read a lot of sensuality within the lines of this masterpiece. I'm reading, yes, bring on the dangerous hurricane, I can withstand your onslaught and give it back tenfold.
Mark
With love,
Ron
Newfie hugs, Rose
Storms...they are so many but only one our hearts wish.
Georg
"Be careful what you ask for"
Once it comes
What does it have in store?
Will you be left wanting more?
Or trying to nail down the door?
Great poem
Doug
Send it my way and take me out of my lethargy. I love your passion and energy and the strength and force of your communication.
John
hugs
fee
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Great write I enjoyed it, but next time I'm wearing a rain coat
Have a sunny day
The Buzzard
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Cheers,
Dan
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.