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Tailored Tears
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heart feeling distance .......................................................................
Tailored Tears ....................................................... She entered slowly... With cautious pace, Feeling her way, As I gained her confidence... Her timid spirit appealed to me. With soft heart... In need with hunger, Her girlish smile... Could not hide her essence of true woman... So passionate...so feminine... With psychic of pure lover... And spirit that seduced me. Blond curls brushed my face, As her beauty hovered over me... Filling me with love... She so desperately needed to give... And I so desperately needed to sooth me. Whispers passed through lips of mouth, Her mother once promised she'd grow into... Melting mine...filling my world, As we became one... In mind, body and soul. Love as I had never known before... Received or given, Hung our future from the sky... All we need do, was to embrace and enter it... Together. Her reality came crashing in, With waves of separation... Washing me into distant pain... I found my heart, Drowning in my tears. Erin Woods

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on May 19, 2008

Your poem is moving, as a warm breeze warming ones face,, sometimes the breeze is no longer,,, Very Beautiful Poem!

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on April 1, 2008

Exceptional poem Erin, love holly

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 19, 2008

A very moving account of a "love" encounter, Erin. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on February 17, 2008

There ya go again Erin...perfection!!!!

V*

Reviewed by RaeLynn Teller

Reviewed on February 16, 2008

That's what I'm talking about.
Just lovely, Erin.
Thanks--RaeLynn

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 13, 2008

Erin this is an exquisite love poem, even with the sad ending,I hope it is fiction;-) So good to read you again. I don't think you know you have to rate your poems now, in order for them to show up on the boards.

Love,
Eileen