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i was sitten in a bar last night sittin on a bar stool drinkin' a beer
she sat down beside me auburn hair blue eyes nice breast long legs "hey" seemed the thing to say contemU-Ously she knodded i figgered a beer was $2.00 so should the conversation continue... got my happy ass up... played the juke box... $5.00 sat my ass back down she smiled lit my cigareetttttttee slowly she smiled juke box played my tune she smiled i smoked i drank an old stale beer she smiled long legs blue eyes nice ass breasts i said... "i'm old" she said "so i'm told' said... "i'm younger than you.." that tweent be hard i thought i'm old so i been told she touched my hand she smiled we made love me i was old she was young

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Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on September 13, 2005

Lol at Jay!!

The imagery is outstanding!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on September 12, 2005

Poets soul said it all, beyond the fact that no matter how old you are, you can always feel just a bit younger when picked up by someone younger than yourself...Ed ( I think I remember those days...;)

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on September 12, 2005

So you got lucky!... :)

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on September 12, 2005

So it be told.

Ron

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