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this is a hold up
by Steve Patterson → (All Poetry by Steve Patterson)
  
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hey, this is
a hold up!
an all shook up.
gimme' your heart!
that part
ya' keep tryin' ta hide.
back there
where
ya' won't let go.
let it show!
don't ya' know?
this is a hold up!

open the safe!
or i'll blow it!
make ya' show it!
gimme' your heart!
that's a start.
we'll see where
we go
from there.

hand's up in the air!
in love & war all's fair.
Ut-Oh
think we're there.

how'd you get the gun?
son!
i give up.
ya' got me
don't ya' see?
give ya' my heart.
i give up.

ok this is your
hold up.


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 Reviews of "this is a hold up"
Reviewed by Kacie Rahm
Reviewed on August 4, 2002
loved it!

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Reviewed on August 4, 2002
Hellow Stephen..
This is really a joyful write. Enjoyed it alot. <grin> Bet she got a laugh out of it too.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on August 4, 2002
Steve, What a delightful cheerful way of getting your 'loves' attention,,wonderful work! Lisa

Reviewed by Sailor Neptune (Reader)
Reviewed on August 3, 2002
Good write adorable love poem.

Reviewed by Willowhawk (Reader)
Reviewed on August 3, 2002
Steve
cute poem
Willowhawk

Reviewed by Wendy Lazaros (Reader)
Reviewed on August 3, 2002
IT'S LOVE!!!
hugs
Wendy


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