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can't ya' see ?
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i love you. what you're doin' to me. can't ya' see what you're lovin' does to me smilin'. grinnin'. spinnin'. feel like i'm winnin' a hand ot two. just lovin' you that'll do. i love what you're doin' to me. can't ya' see what your lovin's doin' to me?

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Reviewed by amy

Reviewed on February 3, 2003

very simple and cheerful... good one Steve

Reviewed by Sandy Gem (Reader)

Reviewed on August 5, 2002

I so agree with Justin. I really prefer a simple poem to express a complex emotion such as love.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on August 5, 2002

yes, steve, we can see what love's doing to you...and it's terrific! GREAT WRITE...TEN! keep 'em coming...love your work. (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Justin Wolf (Reader)

Reviewed on August 5, 2002

Ouch, lambasted by someone who doesn't understand poetry. Don't worry though, I thought it was excellent. Very clipped and yet heartfelt. It's a tough simplicity to pull off but you do it nicely. Bravo.

Reviewed by Sue

Reviewed on August 5, 2002

This has to be the dumbest
poetry that i have ever read!!

Sue

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on August 5, 2002

My we're happy today,,,me thinks love agrees with ya,,,Lisa

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