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Sweet Sue
by Steve Patterson → (All Poetry by Steve Patterson)
  
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I talked to her once or twice before
but today what she had to say was weird
You have such a sexy voice
Yes, I'll give you my boss's cell phone #

So later I called her back
and I backed tracted
and I found out her name
she had 2 or 3 before I found her actual name
Shelby is a name she just made up
but sue is what I can call her
cause sue is who she is
tried to make it clear, outta fear
that business is business
and pleasure is pleasure
and finding her, might just be a treasure

so on friday night
we just might
find out what's right
or what's wrong in this song
or this song will go on and on and on
I told her about me and she said a little about herself
but she held the top shelf
she wasn't gonna show how she felt
I'm the dealer, what cards I've been dealt

but if i can fall in love
what would I think of
her and him or her and I
the hellos or the good byes

if love is a bird there in the hand
two in the bush ain't much worth
the one in the hand can ya understand
what love is
the person next to ya
the next one true to ya

so is that the blues
or is that the true s
or is that just payin the dues

so there's someone new
for her and I
I'll never know
unless I try

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 Reviews of "Sweet Sue"
Reviewed by Marlene Dawn
Reviewed on July 29, 2003
Ah what have ya got to lose. ;-) Nice...:-)
*Marlene*

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on July 29, 2003
You are covering a lot of ground with this one Steve. I have read it a few times now and it really gets to me.

Reviewed on July 29, 2003
good write, steve..i had a co-worker by that name; "Sweet Sue" we called her! we loved her, and now she is gone; the golden corral isn't the same without her! :( ((((HUGS)))) and love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :)

Reviewed by Erica Ivory
Reviewed on July 29, 2003
Go for it.. I can see your some what perplexed.. Great write


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