Trusting Words (poem) by Rebecca Lerwill on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on November 17, 2008

I think we all feel this way... I know I do!
Cryssa

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on July 9, 2008

WE LOVE Metallica! PUMP IT UP!
Is this for WAlt???
I know these feelings! AFTER you open the door, you have to resist the urge to KEEP IT OPEN! :)
This happens so very often, IF we allow it too!
It sounds the POem I wrote this morning Becc! If you got a mint. I was inspired by my muse to write #3 or was it 4... REALLY close in thought! OUR wavelength is CLOSE! and I keep hidden except but to a few chosen! WRITE ON! Touching hearts STRONG!
I love this! A treasure I will savor!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Sheexoooo

Reviewed by Patricia Sanders

Reviewed on June 23, 2008

This poem reads like a song. Very nice.

Reviewed by Matthew Wright (Reader)

Reviewed on January 21, 2008

It's what we all want - someone to break through our shell. Complex feelings well conveyed.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 20, 2008

Excellent poem of yearning for love to last. This is a gem, Becca!

Love,
ET

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on January 20, 2008

Well done a touching write!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on January 20, 2008

It is a good thing when we can let
those feelings out with someone we trust.
I wish I had that someone..
Excellent write.
Hugs and love
Ron

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on January 20, 2008

Verbiage and rhetoric cleverly crafted will see the deed done everytime. Vulnerability exists within us all. These words echo of the wisdom of personal experience? Great little piece of work. Thanks for sharing it. Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 20, 2008

Rebecca,

The line borrowed lent to some powerfully penned lines...well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 20, 2008

Opening ourselves up can sometimes lead to marvelous events.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on January 20, 2008

Love blossoms when you have trust in the one you love.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on January 20, 2008

i enjoyed this--what a beautiful thing to be able to be truly open with another

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 19, 2008

Becca we all have our own way of guarding the things that are most precious to us but sometimes we need to let our guard down when that certain someone comes along who can offer us the comfort to know that they are there for us and will hold our confidences and our feelings as safe as they hold their own. This is a deligtful write from a heart that longs to trust and to care...

Fee