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Lost Virginity
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Sultry eyes in silver moon light
speak of untold needs and wants
her desire and curiosity
alike the one of a debutante’s.


Untouched skin too soft and tender
not to be caressed and teased,
unkissed lips too full and hungry
not to be endeared and pleased.


Far experienced seduction
triggers heat without a source
unknown pleasures fully awaken
letting nature take its course.


Melting bodies unite deeply
into endlessness they’re tossed
lust and love will take its place
where once her virtue was, she lost.


 
 


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 Reviews of "Lost Virginity"
Reviewed by Kalikiano Kalei
Reviewed on February 16, 2008
Lovely: rhythmicity and rhyme.
Romance and love have come to bloom, defining essence of the womb; the act once done is not reversed, when finally lust has done its worst.
K2

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on February 15, 2008
An excellent write Becca
Peace & love Be with you

William

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on February 13, 2008
There is sadness in your words. To wonder. To seek and reach. Would that she had waited 'til married before she sought to be mated, elated. A perspective I had not considered Becca. Your poem took much thought to covey the exact messsage you sought to share. Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 13, 2008
If I may!!

~“ Woman”~

No celebration time
No wait... No!!
Not a joyful occasion
From girl to woman
Sudden wet eyed whisper
Is that virginity
Innocence cries out
Before she knew
The miracle pass
No soft reception
Infant guide
Male contentment
Girl became
W
O
M
A
N
!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on February 12, 2008
BECCA - WELL DONE! VERY POIGNANT!

As they say at Graduations - "this is not an end, but a beginning."

The Beginning of Womanhood ... another cycle of Nature. Tom.

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on February 12, 2008
One of your finest Becca.

Walt

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on February 12, 2008
Lovely verses and rhythm, I enjoyed this poem very much. I like your style!
Much Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 12, 2008
Nature usually does take its course, in all things in life.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on February 12, 2008
Becca,

The rhyme and flow were perfect.

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on February 11, 2008
It reminds me of ......... my own loss of virginity. There is a sadness in this memory. Not quite what I'd expected.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on February 11, 2008
A poetic yet realistic account of the feelings and attraction and how it all takes place. Virginity is a loss only when girls are taught that this is somethis essential that they have to keep. Without such pressure, it isn't much. A detail in a blossoming sex life! Full of discoveries ahead...

Axilea




Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 11, 2008
Great poetry..
Today's time and many think, I wonder what a virgin is?
Wth love,
Ron

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 11, 2008
Ah to seduce the heart of one so lovely and win the right to kiss the sweet virginity of her blossoming youth...sweet write snuggles.

Fee

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on February 11, 2008
Very tastefully written piece of trials and tribualtions induced by love or wanting of....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on February 11, 2008
a very sensuous write-wonderfully penned

Reviewed on February 11, 2008
Whew, this is a scorcher, well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 11, 2008
But she gained nevertheless . . . Don't ya think? . . . Nicely done . . .

Reviewed on February 11, 2008
Excellent poetry, Rebecca; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D


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