Lovely: rhythmicity and rhyme.
Romance and love have come to bloom, defining essence of the womb; the act once done is not reversed, when finally lust has done its worst.
K2
There is sadness in your words. To wonder. To seek and reach. Would that she had waited 'til married before she sought to be mated, elated. A perspective I had not considered Becca. Your poem took much thought to covey the exact messsage you sought to share. Jon Michael Willey
No celebration time
No wait... No!!
Not a joyful occasion
From girl to woman
Sudden wet eyed whisper
Is that virginity
Innocence cries out
Before she knew
The miracle pass
No soft reception
Infant guide
Male contentment
Girl became
W
O
M
A
N
!
A poetic yet realistic account of the feelings and attraction and how it all takes place. Virginity is a loss only when girls are taught that this is somethis essential that they have to keep. Without such pressure, it isn't much. A detail in a blossoming sex life! Full of discoveries ahead...
Axilea
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 11, 2008
Great poetry..
Today's time and many think, I wonder what a virgin is?
Wth love,
Ron
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Romance and love have come to bloom, defining essence of the womb; the act once done is not reversed, when finally lust has done its worst.
K2
Peace & love Be with you
William
~“ Woman”~
No celebration time
No wait... No!!
Not a joyful occasion
From girl to woman
Sudden wet eyed whisper
Is that virginity
Innocence cries out
Before she knew
The miracle pass
No soft reception
Infant guide
Male contentment
Girl became
W
O
M
A
N
!
Love Tinka
As they say at Graduations - "this is not an end, but a beginning."
The Beginning of Womanhood ... another cycle of Nature. Tom.
Walt
Much Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
The rhyme and flow were perfect.
God bless you. Kathy
Axilea
Today's time and many think, I wonder what a virgin is?
Wth love,
Ron
Fee
Be always safe,
Karen
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D