Look into my eyes... (poem) by ellen george on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on April 10, 2013

Eyes, center of the soul and tell the tale of many stories if we only knew...Beautiful!

Enjoyed reading!

Teresa

Reviewed on April 7, 2013

very romantic--you do have nice eyes and i find it hard to look away.....

Reviewed on May 21, 2012

This brought tears to my eyes. You have captured the emotions of a woman in transition longing to regain a love once shared!

Reviewed by Jayme Sheets (Reader)

Reviewed on April 25, 2010

Oddly enough I've never heard of this poem before today, but it was sent to mr in a dream I had about an ex and the first thing I did when I woke up was google it! He has gotten married recently and in my dream I was visiting them and as I was leaving he handed me a card that had This poem on it....

Reviewed by John Domino

Reviewed on August 2, 2009

Very touching romantic poetry!

John Michael

Reviewed by Basem Attiyat (Reader)

Reviewed on June 25, 2009

The eyes are 'the windows of the soul' as they can send many different non-verbal signals.
Thank you it,s beautiful poem.
Basem

Reviewed by Gary Tenuta

Reviewed on December 28, 2007

Hi Ellen. I wanted to share with you my reaction to this poem. The poem consists of 10 lines. The first 9 lines were nothing special - and I don't mean that in a negative sense at all. Let me explain. They were perfectly fine, well written and they said what they were supposed to say. Then I got to the 10th and final line and I just lingered there for several moments - caught like a gnat in a spider's web - and nodded my head and went "Wow. Yes." The success of the whole poem is so neatly wrapped up in that oh-so-subtle but emotionally charged last line. It pulled the other 9 lines right down into it. I felt it. It reached me. It stirred up something familiar, somewhere inside me. I knew what that last line meant. What more can one ask of a poem? Nice work, Ellen. 5 stars! :-)

Reviewed by Grant Mobielle

Reviewed on December 27, 2007

Wonderfully moving, deep, pointed. With these simple words, you eloquently display a beautiful passion which tugs at ones heart.

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on December 19, 2007

If only...nice one!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on December 7, 2007

A compelling, soul-reaching plea, Ellen. Very moving. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on November 28, 2007

There is so much yo see for those who want to see, of course! Some can only see their own projections, transforming you into their object. How sad! But you have written lines that are made of honesty and simplicity, nicely done!

Axilea

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Reviewed on September 26, 2007

I hate carrying on a conversation with someone who won't look into my eyes, but then since I can't see their eyes - there's obviously nothing there for me.

Kathy

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on September 24, 2007

Ohh, it's so sad but yet hopeful. Beautiful, Ellen!
Your friend from Utah!
R~