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Her first date
by Mark C. Carroll → (All Poetry by Mark C. Carroll)
  
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She liked a boy; even her eyes were giddy as they danced
like snowflakes of winters first storm.
My heart may have fluttered while I watched my daughter grow
as if the most exclusive sunshine charged her glow.

She never cared before what others thought
content in the way she played her part.
Now, she was miss priss as she prepared
Hesitantly, my compliments shared.

Now dancing and casting her puppy love spell
like the wind guides the lightning into its next lair
Her smile brighter than a reflection of sea
I shuddered and thought it could never be.

Now days beyond and behind us now
She makes me this most solemn vow
To trust me more because parents know
How love comes and how loves go.

©2002 Mark C. Carroll
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 Reviews of "Her first date"
Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
Reviewed on February 25, 2002
Wow!! I can just imagine the pride in your eyes. :>) Great write.
Thanks for your comment.
Jenni

Reviewed by William Manchee
Reviewed on February 25, 2002
I have a wonderful daughter too. I know the feeling. Great poem.

Reviewed by Audrey Cooper (Reader)
Reviewed on February 25, 2002
Hi Mark, beautiful!

Your Poetry Friend, Audrey

Reviewed by Charles Mann (Reader)
Reviewed on February 25, 2002
wonderful tribute,I relly enjoyed this,Charlie

Reviewed by Sharon Williamson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 25, 2002
What a beautiful tribute of love for your daughter.....
Great write.
Sharon


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