and will look for you past the eaves of slumber deep within the soul of sleep beyond the shoals of what might have been to the shores of what must be your eyes draw me into mystery awaken me to love blessing life with wonder's joy
i fall for you
and will call to you singing psalms of thanksgiving gentle whispers of love's laughter stir passionate thoughts into wakeful need dreaming of dawn in your arms tommorrow's promise a beacon of light to one lost in squalor and sin
i fall for you
and will follow you across seas of sorrow sails of satin and silk billow with the breath of heart's desire frothing waves crash against rocky promontories while together we fly across skies of midnight clarity moonlit our souls split in twain fusing as one reunited
I am STUNNED!!!!! This is glorious work..magnificent..how much joy this poem has brought me..I'm saving this..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is one of your best..ahhh..written with such passion of expectation..Thankyou..may you gift us with more works of this nature!!!!
When Sophie Bayles inadvertently ruins a young man’s chance for employment, she sets out to find him a new position. Even though he doesn’t want her to.
This is one of your best..ahhh..written with such passion of expectation..Thankyou..may you gift us with more works of this nature!!!!
Vesna ...:)
Excellant use of words, and feeling.
I will list this as Your best Lyric Poem of the year.
This is the eleventh of March, 2004 - at 06:10 EST.
Happy Healthy Day, Sublime Poet Mark Rockeymoore.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
What emotion!
Great poem!
Thank you for my review!
every line...great flow..
love the essence of this poem..
oh that piece of art is exquisite..
floria
smooth, well written, purposeful poem ..
I like it ...
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
craft written in these verses mark!
Reindeer