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The Stranger that I dated
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THE STRANGER THAT I DATED

 

I thought i knew him

 

he said we were more than just friends

 

together forever

 

i believed him

 

i'd been down too many dead ends

 

The road ahead looked brightly strewn

 

with neon glitter and renewed hope

 

but i never saw the noose he tied

 

around my words

 

and let them choke

 

He would listen

 

but he could not hear

 

he could see

 

not that i was blinded by fear

 

as i disguised my tear 

 

behind a smile

 

and my lips bled a lie

 

that i was not hurt by his inaction

 

when all the while

 

i was forced into retraction

 

he gave me enough rope to hang myself

 

but i went fishing instead.

 

THE STRANGER THAT I LOVED

 

before i met him

 

i knew he'd hurt me

 

before i left him

 

i had loved him unconditionally

 

but he expected perfection

 

and i was broken

 

And for that crime

 

he has not spoken

 

more than a few syllables

 

And for all my foibles

 

i still love him

 

because i have not been

 

loved for myself

 

but judged by my cover

 

by a heartless lover

 

The stranger that i dated

 

became the stranger that i loved

 

And forever more will i endure

 

the pain of rejection

 

despite the arduous affection

 

of many other suitors

 

it just took one to destroy

 

any self esteem i had left to employ

 

AJ
   

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 Reviews of "The Stranger that I dated"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 16, 2008
I guess that is why it is said that "love hurts." Thank you for sharing, Andrea. Love and blessings to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Gloria Gay
Reviewed on October 29, 2007
Don't give your heart too quickly would be the lesson in this poem. This poem is engaging and interesting. Well done.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on October 27, 2007
You sound so disheartened, disillusioned. Look to God for comfort and stand tall in the sun where you will find peace....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed on October 27, 2007
Excellent write --holds true.


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