Sheet Music (poem) by Phyllis Jean Green on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on November 7, 2005

Love the flow of thoughts and meaning, Pea. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace.

Regis

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on November 5, 2005

music of the soul

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on November 4, 2005

Love the flow of this poem!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on November 4, 2005

Pea,

Perfection in free flowing thought! I wish I could write like this...you rock!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on November 4, 2005

This is a perfect stream of thought piece of writing. It reads like an avanche of feelings and sensations creating images on a moment of awakening as if portions of a dream were filtering through semi-consciousness. That is also the way music affects me, at least. It sends me into a dream-like state of mind and lets me dwell on images not conjured by my awareness, but rather impressions born from the subconscious. I think I'll read this a few more times. I have the feeling there's more to be seen. :-)

Carmen

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on November 4, 2005

wonderful write, pea; love how you do it!! well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on November 4, 2005

Beats being shaken eh Pea :)

Love Ch'erie

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on November 4, 2005

Phyllis,

Quite a beatiful array of meaningful and wonderful words. This was truly a fantastic voyage.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on November 4, 2005

A splendid outpouring of connected thoughts and feelings that somehow all melt together in a poetry of the imagination. I enjoyed this one, though not completely sure of the connections it will defiantely be read a few more times and give me somehting to think on.

Felix

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 3, 2005

Masterfully written!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)

Reviewed on November 3, 2005

Phyllis, this is Phenomenal!
outstanding and very imaginative!
a real masterpiece!
peace',
rich criso

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on November 3, 2005

AWESOME! This is inner imagery at its best! Inner imager is close to what one sees when dreaming, the difference being that one is in a waking rather than a sleeping state. Inner images are what many writers, artists, and architects work with. I do. This method closely allies with Jung's "active imagination"---the voluntary seeing of images. Inner imagery is useful to those of us who use it because we are relaxed in body, but firm in mind, just as lastnight's sunset or some far away memory of childhood. Pea, you give energy to it so that it is free to move and develop in its own way. You start with the image and hold it in the mind's eye. The result is Sheet Music! Excellent inner imagery write!

Sage

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on November 3, 2005

Absolutely a masterful show and tell piece of tantalizing poetry. Gotta love it.