Crumpled by Dumpster (poem) by Phyllis Jean Green on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on November 19, 2006

Hi again~ Blesssings for the all that was to be done!
Crumpled by the dumpster, glad you picked it up!
YOur routines are done is fun pen form, I love it...
Warm HuGs,Sheee

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on July 28, 2006

Enjoyed tremendously this absorbing swirl of consciousness making its way through mundane practicalities and emotional tension. As with much of the best your work--to me--it illustrates the tight rope of anxiety (or is it sensitivity?) stretched between the nonchalance and quiet desperation that composes so many of our lives. And that somehow ends up tossed out of our souls CRUMPLED BY DUMPSTER.
Aberjhani

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on July 23, 2006

Hi Pea:

A very intriguing write, and very thought-provoking! Something like a slice of life and is honest and real. Good to read something like this.

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Amgel :o)

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on July 19, 2006

This poem had an emotional impact on me. I'm not sure why. Your work is so creative and innovative, Pea. Thank you. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on July 18, 2006

Love this, Pea! One could live this simple list for life...or at least I could...what more do you need...maybe a few rhinestones and Rit! I printed this out and magneted it to my fridge with a ceramic pea in the pod I have!--->it's a keeper.

Sage

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on July 17, 2006

Adorable, so real and yeat so sweet (most by the cookie aisle :))
B&R

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on July 16, 2006

I love freckles and chocolate kiss eyes.

My oh my what a day I'd say.

Best wishes

Reviewed by Sandi Schraut

Reviewed on July 15, 2006

sounds like my life actually like high heels staccato tapping, shortened thoughts with only time to hear bits and pieces of life as it rushes by in a blur...........GREAT WORDS!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on July 15, 2006

Everyones gone cookie Kookie

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 15, 2006

It is amazing the messages and stories of our day to day lifes that are captured in our many varied list and routines as this poem so brightly shows captured.

Fee

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 15, 2006

Seems to me like the cookie bug been a contagious thingy all over the Den...lol!!

Well Done Pea!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 15, 2006

Never Forget the Cookies!!!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 15, 2006

Complex. Unique. Brilliant slices of life, the moment here, then gone, thrown away like so much trash...well done, my beloved Pea!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan

Reviewed on July 15, 2006

What a bundle of emotions all wrapped up in a grocery bag full of life and love's complexities. Just incredibly flashing and imaginative and real my friend.
Love,
Taylor

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on July 15, 2006

Pea

Only you, brilliant you, could have written this wonderfully original and imaginative piece..

And do I detect Pea... that you have been afflicted with that deadly cookie craving, instigated by Ogre Ed and Lady A Pax...:)

Loved it

Love

Peter