Drunk on playing hooky and Wild
Turkey, slip to the creek to make love,
oblivious to the danger presented
by sharp rocks and woken snakes.
Any minute now, a camper's going
to stagger from a nearby tent, waving
a flashlight with one hand, grabbing
his fly with the other. Spy us
and forget to pee. So?? Got to camp
early, which meant time to take a dip
in the lake. Wore out the kids, yay.
Add blackened burgers, couple cans
of pork'n'beans and s'mores, strictly
lights out. Damp brown and yellow
cow-licks peek from Carolina blue
sleeping bags. New tent plenty big
enough to rig a curtain. You two
dragged in enough sand for a castle,
we teased over s'mores. Their turn
to laugh when I dropped my second
cracker. Chocolate rolled merrily
down my new One tee. Nothing
beats having kids. Nothing
beats sneaking in a little us-time.
Jungle loving in skin that tingles
from a good dose of sand and sun.
Not that drunk. Done, begin to chafe
where rocks dug and what-all.
We clamber up the bank, supporting
each other and feeling sheepish.
Not the brightest thing to do. Nor
the dumbest, our eyes meet to say.
What are a few scrapes and bruises?
Big stars wink in the spaces breeze-
tickled treetops open. Temp 70,
humidity 70. Big sites, nice folk.
Odd fly or skeeter, bit of grit with
your eggs and a rock or three, 's'awiiiight.
Just as long as time still stands still
while children sleepily open eyes
that they still believe a sandman fills.
Stay, World, stay.
Phyllis, your controlled rambling (perhaps with A Wild
Turkey assist) captured the moments perfectly, the kind
of moments to hang on to and, happily, share. - Gene.
Awww, just love all of your sentiments on wanting to make the moment last longer. Camping with kids is wonderful and can be an experience to share later as the good times begin to mount and the bucket of memories is over flowing with love and laughter...
Lol. What a great poem. Love allthe alone time. A few bruises and bug bites. lol. What fun. Life was so easy with kids and spouse and love all arounds. Excellent. Liz
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
Greatly enjoyed - very pleasing detail with a flow that's congruent with how fleeting these moments seem in retrospect.
Richly imaged, I am lost in your world - Pea, the power of your pen! I have never loved camping, but will change my mind, if it's anything like this - as for carving initials:
kjd
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pjg !!!!!
This is such a lovely voyeurish look into what it really means to be parents and lovers. Such sweetness and also desire that make a marraige a thing that explodes with years of memories. Sweet.
This is a sentimental and epic story about a young man, injured in the Viewnam War, who returns to Dallas, Texas, in 1964, and begins rebuilding his life. Set against the rock and roll era of the early 1960’s, when casual sex and recreational drugs w
Turkey assist) captured the moments perfectly, the kind
of moments to hang on to and, happily, share. - Gene.
Be always safe,
Karen
Stunning walked through memory lane!!
Peace Love and Hugessss...Morning star
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
kjd
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pjg !!!!!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
hugs
Fee
WOW! Those were the days and the magical moments. Well worth the trip down memory lane. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.