Darkness is no more;
Ice dissipates into mist;
Walls of stone crumble;
The tallest buildings topple;
And, I literally melt
From the inside out.
My head is sent
Spinning, spinning, spinning,
From just one,
Small,
Simple,
Sultry,
Comforting,
Glimpse of your
Soothing smile.
How true. A smile(or one glance)can turn a dismal day to sun. The brevity and choice of language here exquisitely captures the mood of this poem. Adore this. Congrats on your win, Jill!
I wrote this novel several years ago, I self published and never had it to sell. I have decided to rewrite it and hope to get it published within a few months for people to be able to buy. I had a few copies and gave them to a few family members and
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