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Old Woman, Old Man
by Mark M Lichterman → (All Poetry by Mark M Lichterman)
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Old Woman, Old Man

 

Shuffling by,

Held with both hands,

She within the confines of her walker

He alongside with a hand held atop her hand

To steady his now unsure legs and,

Throughout their sixty-five years,

His hand still felt most comfortable

When atop her hand.

 

Old man whom

At one time walked upright,

Whom at one time walked steadily upon his feet.

 

Old woman whom,

At one time strolled upright,

Whom at one time strolled steadily upon her feet.

 

Years turned back!

Time running in reverse!

Gray shaded under-eyes

Gone.

Loosely hanging flesh

Below eyes

Below chin

Low hanging

Cheeks and jowls gone.

Wrinkles gone.

 

White cast eyes

Once again deep brown and vivid blue.

 

Sagging breasts

Now upright.

Hanging stomach and wrinkly buttocks

Now gone.

 

Old Man

Shuffling by

Old Woman

Shuffling by

Once at one time

Youthful,

Once at one time

Lively

Once at one time

Lively and,

In their own way,

Lovely

Lovely and loved.

 

Shuffling by,

Held with both hands,

She within the confines of her walker

He alongside with a hand held atop her hand

To steady his now unsure legs and,

Throughout their sixty-five years,

His hand still felt most comfortable

When atop her hand.

 

Though the years have not

Turned back.

Though time has not

Run in reverse.

The old man’s hand

Held atop the hand of the old woman,

Each lovely in their own way.

Throughout the sixty-five years

Of marriage,

The old man,

The old woman,

Still loved,

Still in love.

 

 

 ©February 11, 2013/ Mark M. Lichterman

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Old Woman, Old Man"
Reviewed by Isabella Koldras
Reviewed on April 22, 2013
"Love is the irresistible desire
to be irresistibly desired" - Mark Twain.
....and now we hear from your absolutely
wonderful poem....that actually someone
can be loved forever......May we all be
this lucky...someday?

Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald
Reviewed on March 2, 2013
This is so lovely. I know a couple like you have written about here. They are older but so much in love still that you can see it in their eyes and in what they say and do together. Love this work.
hugs
Kat

Reviewed by Keith Rowley
Reviewed on February 12, 2013
You have painted an incredibly bright, burning picture of enduring, unconquerable love - and I love it! It's also I think a well constructed piece that illustrates your own style rather well. Great work Mark - I really like this - it stands out.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 12, 2013
You have a unique way of writing that I enjoy. This one is especially touching. My parents made 62 years before dad died. But even then, they were not like that couple––old. Perhaps because they married so young.

Ron

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on February 12, 2013
Oh my God! This is simply beautiful, Mark! The tenderness...the love...still shared after so many years! I love this!!!!

Anna

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on February 11, 2013
Timeless!

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on February 11, 2013
as it should be after that amount of time
budd

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on February 11, 2013
Hah! Everything is wrinkled and sags, huh, Mark? Good write . . .


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