Cascading into entropy, trapped in a distillation of my dreams, I fall forever as the world holds still.
Your eyes strip me to an essencial core Love is gravity and momentum finding balance. Solar winds and star-tides, curl within my belly. I exist betweet heartbeats in a place only you can reach.
Are we suspended or suspending? The universe must wait as we decide.
What a riveting poem! It does kind of keep the reader in a state of limbo, wondering what is next. Thanks for your suggestions on my children's story.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on June 20, 2004
Lee,
This is a visual one indeed.
"Your eyes strip me
to an essencial core
Love is gravity and momentum
finding balance.
Solar winds and star-tides,
curl within my belly.
I exist betweet heartbeats
in a place only you can reach.'
And one that is waiting,
so good to see you back...
lady peg
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on June 19, 2004
Lee, were it I, I would make sure the decision was in her favor. The need for action seems obvious? Bill Murray
Book 1 of a Life Changing Love Story Trilogy
An incredible love story about the bonds of trust, passion and friendship that will forever change the lives of a fireman, the manager of a horse rescue ranch and everyone around them. A story of compas
When Miranda Nolan inherits a house she soon discovers a need to solve the mysteries surrounding the late owner along with resolving the strong attraction she feels for a co-claimant who lost his hearing and faces a world of silence.
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Amor
This is a visual one indeed.
"Your eyes strip me
to an essencial core
Love is gravity and momentum
finding balance.
Solar winds and star-tides,
curl within my belly.
I exist betweet heartbeats
in a place only you can reach.'
And one that is waiting,
so good to see you back...
lady peg