I come
like the morning,
creeping cat-like
across your bed.
You are silent and still
in your knowing
You let me awaken you
with the smallest of kisses,
I burn my hands, my heart,
in the pyre of your hair.
Celestial blue
is the color
of mystery,
the hue I see,
When you stare at me,
and I behold an alien sky
deep as your soul
where the best part of me
will ever fly--
You roll against me
and I comfort you
as you warm my spirit
in an alchemy
of love.
I am vanquished--
by your surrender,
you triumph,
and I don't mind at all,
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Reviews of "An Alchemy of Love"
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on October 15, 2003
deep as your soul
where the best part of me
will ever fly--
Exquisite..alas I cannot find another word to describe the excellence of this piece..ty
what else could a woman ask for. Romance is alive and kicking I am pleased to see.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 23, 2002
Wonderful romantic imagery. Like this very much.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on September 23, 2002
For I am in awe to the beauty of love penned in thy lines Lee,"Celestial blue
is the color
of mystery,
the hue I see,
When you stare at me,
and I behold an alien sky
deep as your soul
where the best part of me
will ever fly-- "
soaring in romantic debute...
Peg
The Matchmaker:
Angela Calminetti, mother of five, New Age practitioner and gifted psychic and telepath, is proud of her family ties and does everything she can to make sure that all of her younger siblings are as happy in love and marriage
Shirine McVey discovers that twenty years of her life have elapsed since she went to sleep in a hotel room in El Paso, Texas. And worse, she is married to a man she doesn't know.
where the best part of me
will ever fly--
Exquisite..alas I cannot find another word to describe the excellence of this piece..ty
Vesna
is the color
of mystery,
the hue I see,
When you stare at me,
and I behold an alien sky
deep as your soul
where the best part of me
will ever fly-- "
soaring in romantic debute...
Peg