Gravity bends
the substance of my dreams.
I cross the threshold
of your event horizon.
Light precedes me,
attenuating,
wrapping me in ribbons--
sailing me
into nights true heart.
I am crushed
by your presence,
bathed in the passion
of unseen flame.
I spiral toward extinction
surrendering to torture.
A lightless fussion possesses me,
my beloved Dark Star.
blinding beauty
sears my flesh,
a white-hot crucible
where two souls meld
an alloy tempered
past reason.
I fall into her fire.
I part the flames
with my passion
Ashes scattered
by her hand,
uncover a phoenix
in hiding
I am reborn.
Her arms form
a welcome cage,
soft lips invite
a tour of paradise.
I am lost in
consumption
pleasure is a wheel
turning endlessly.
Dayum! This is a phosphorous write and warming all inside. Great passion here in your creativity.
Peace and love,
Susan
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2003
Lee
Hi Stranger
"I fall into her fire.
I part the flames
with my passion
Ashes scattered
by her hand,
uncover a phoenix
in hiding
I am reborn. "
This is excellent imagery
and romantic
{smiles} Peg
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2003
"...blinding beauty
sears my flesh,
a white-hot crucible
where two souls meld
an alloy tempered
past reason..."
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Peace and love,
Susan
Hi Stranger
"I fall into her fire.
I part the flames
with my passion
Ashes scattered
by her hand,
uncover a phoenix
in hiding
I am reborn. "
This is excellent imagery
and romantic
{smiles} Peg
sears my flesh,
a white-hot crucible
where two souls meld
an alloy tempered
past reason..."
Passionate lines. Well done. Bravo.