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Like No Other

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Picturing unusual points of view for first person story telling brings on some interesting challenges.


Sunday, February 26, 2012

Like No Other

 

Hanging chained sign

am I

Established 1933

“Bakery” my name

 

Swinging through time my game

just lettin’ concrete canyon winds

wind their way around and through

glass and steel hives of commerce

uptown

downtown

all around

 

Like a trapeze artist

in perpetual motion

I see

I hear

swirls of

people

animals

things

all day

every day

right here

corner 10th and 46th

 

 

Above me used to house hooker delights

Below me once flowed oohs and ahs

Some from the bakery goods

fresh from the oven

others from tourists

mesmerized with this month’s

shell game antics

                  atop card table unstable

 

To my left

Bus stop misery

Express and local depression alike

Bench for daytime waiting

Slab for nighttime sleeping

 

To my right

Pimps on alert

Hookers on the beat

Down the block

Johns pulled to the curb

 

Quite a location actually

 

One way or another

my corner will always traffic realities

Foreign to most

understood by few

 

Got a mongrel dog as company

Beasty always stat

Trash can low to his left / me high to his right

 

Doesn’t bark

Never whines

Just howls his harmony

Hound-dog-rap

my pimp friend called it

Every once in a while

the preacher came by

placed his box on the corner

climbed aboard

raised his Bible

and ranted

 

Hooker delights stopped

Oohs and ahs ceased

Beasty took some nap time

While pimps

hookers

even “I love NY” tourists

would scurry to the cross walks

Anywhere

but here

their eye rolls proclaimed

 

Oh man…

here comes sunrise

 

Special

I mean

Special Special

Winds

nowhere

People

nowhere

Hooker delights

somewhere

Bakery scents…

 

It all used to be everywhere

 

Beasty was always at the ready

Got his bagel every morning

A smear of chopped liver on top

He was good for the day

 

But

 

Today is the day

Waitin’ for the wrecking ball

Due to start at seven sharp

So while I can

gonna enjoy maybe

my last view

 

It’s

Like no other

you know

 

 



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Reviewed on February 27, 2012
everything that falls apart was apart in a way. or unhinged. there are sights and sounds that stay with us for a lifetime. A Smell that can fetch and instant moment. As if, we ever viewed it from above. It lies in the heart. ~ Morgan

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 27, 2012
Quite a story–captivating.

Ron

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on February 27, 2012
This would seem to me to be an absent-minded stream of consciousness experienced whilst walking the streets and avenues of New York. We might think our brain is on autopilot and disengaged from contemplation but it's amazing how the same images are picked up on again and again according to how our mind or emotions are operating. I like the sharp focus that the wrecking ball suddenly gives to this otherwise drifting city observation and assimilation, Odin. This view "like no other" will certainly not be the same once this tool has done its work. Interesting and arresting format you have adopted here, too, that adds to its intrigue. Also like how the hanging chained sign and the movement of the trapeze artist capture movement between still points. Fascinating stuff, thank you. Kate


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