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· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· Reality of Another Kind

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· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

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Destiny's Mirror

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Sometimes recalling observations eerily feels like one's own reality waiting in the wings. Remembering my father in the rest home shaving reminds me to update my mental outlook once again.

Wednesday, March 28, 2012

Destiny's Mirror

Shaving
Old has time to think
Lives clumsily
Needs rail-anchors in the bath tub
Where floating takes on child-like fantasy
Then rescinding stolen pleasure
With the feather-filled couch
So nice to sink into
So painful to rise out of

Yesterday's love forgetting
Today's body remembering
Pitched tent
Atop a mountain peak
Sheltering bodies arched
Pebbles hiding beneath ground cloth
Affections forever indented in knee-cap memory
Climbing kisses
Now but mementos
Afloat within gathering clouds

Shit

Miserable mirror on the wall
Who's most feisty of them all

Old once knew young
The now who knew itself then
Beyond any fear
Above any retreat
Now stares vacantly
At withered skin
Where trophy scars once glittered
Their scar tissue aglow
Now upstaged by a monstrous bruise

F***ing table corner
Leaped out from nowhere

Look at this
I know reflection's lookin' at me

Irony sends a smile
Face smiles back
A gloating embrace of another kind
Without gentle touch
Without a kiss so missed
As time races forward
Readying another chance embrace

Mirrors distort
Don't they

Of course they do

 

 



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Reviewed by Asa Seeley
Reviewed on March 28, 2012
i don't know what is worse; the reflections in destiny's mirror that we don't want to face or, not having any reflections. thanks for sharing.

asa

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on March 28, 2012
This is almost too painful to read as it applies so well to myself, as the reader, not wanting to let go of dear faint youth but watching helplessly as it eludes me. Excellent piece of work.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on March 28, 2012
Ah, buddy, you're singing my song. I've a birthday coming up early next week. Birthday's never used to bother me. The fifties, sixties, but the day I turned seventy, I said to myself, damn, Jer, people die when they reach seventy. I'm still hanging on, but I see little signs almost daily that my physical and mental capacity is going into the shitter.

P.S.: I have a secret plan. Ssssssh . . .


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