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Melting Pianos

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

This is an exploration of a grand piano lost in a fire, and in its rather inordinate representation as one of my greatest losses (following that of my parents a few years ago). I was struck by the memories of playing the instrument and its ability to lift my spirits--and because the painting of Dali's melting piano keys and clock hung behind it, the two impressions came forth as one. Losing one's prize possession in a house fire, leaves but memories needing to be grounded.

Monday, April 16, 2012

Melting Pianos
   like liquid clocks of undulating passage atop the branches
     stretching their forever time downward
         to shroud the languid buds of Spring's rhapsody

Will rhythms of youth
      merge with gratefulness
            upon the austerity of our symphony's last movement

Will the luster of ebony
       illumine the memory amidst the swirling ashes
            where Damper pads desperately work to protect the melodies once ours

Will the glistening heat of completeness
       bring forth yet another incarnation of perpetual motion
             a once calm tonality as the seedling of a measure's beginning
                     now the climax of the ever calm
                            the tremolo of eternal movement
Melting pianos
        glacial resonance
                life with death



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Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on October 10, 2021
Hello Odin, this is the other Diana, having just today been contacted by Diana Wiles, who wrote that she wished I would return to Authors Den. I had not corresponded with her for years. She said many of the regulars are still here. And I told her Odin Roark was always one of my favorites. I left the Den some years ago, and looking in here, I see the names of people whose writing I so immersed myself in for the years I had a membership here. How great to read this poetry again, and see my 2012 comment about it is still here; some things have lasting power exceeding life itself. I may come back with a membership — so much has changed, but what a positive feeling to see the names of those who I followed those many years ago. I’m glad you are still writing. I’ve always enjoyed your introductory language, as well as how you credited art that accompanied your writing. Even your titles so unique ‘Melting Pianos.’ ~~ djl

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on April 16, 2012
Enormous ache in the "where Damper pads desperately work to protect the melodies once ours." In that line alone resides the 'belonging' amid 'loss,' and futility. 'glacial resonance' exudes slow-motion and 'ripple effect' in one mouthful: "life with death." It is the end of a voice. Or voices. The echo continues into everywhere forever. That is what this writing tells me. ~~ Diana


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