oh yes, there are so many unexplored corners, and you have such a wonderful intellectual challenge in all of your work ~
Be well,
Christine

I love the fact that you reach into your soul and pull out all that is in you, love this poem makes you think if you're life is a shimmer please keep doing what you do!!! carolyn

"momentary masters of a fraction of a dot" - quote of Carl Sagan. Odin, I find that your poem contains the compressed compost of allness. I see inside this huge little poem and feel it is a keyhole within a keyhole the way microspecs in the sun drift into web and the way you make it float and settle with lines as herculean as "To be that/Which knows from where it came" and "....laughter learned its way" "...seas of peace" "...relax..." "...compliance..." complexion of something as miniscule as one little pixel, so what is the big fuss.... Utterly grand presentation. ~~ Diana

this time not exactly my view, mine does not need be yours..interesting write as always
budd

That all sounds almost existentialist, but I think therefore I . . . I refuse to have my existence be categorized as merely a shimmer. I may be less even than a shimmer, but again, I think, therefore I . . .