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Hide and Seek Death

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With the influx of militant Shiites and Sunnis into the Syrian conflict, a civil war with added religious rivalry seems inevitable. This rivalry as fodder for war is ancient, once again remanding rationality even further into the background.

Sunday, November 4, 2012

Hide and Seek Death

He had survived
Six months had made him a man
Today
He only wanted his mother
Today
The clock was running slow
Slower
Stopping
Hopefully
Begging

Such hopeful beginnings
Such bestial endings
Caked fingers bear blood
Water too precious to remove

Desert sand roughage
Makes worthless dry heaves

Skittering boot prints
Like zig zagging sand pipers
Void of food
Wary of enemies
Make patterns so plain
This hide and seek death dance

Today
Seems right

Months of sand storms and fire
Leave but sun baked flotsam
Mixed bodies of friend and foe
Their survival charge piled high
Making but stumbling of boots
Across rotting bodies and limbs
Even flies and rats now ignore

With fingers blood-welded to weapon
He lay down among the carnage
Eager to know the peace
The quiet
The involuntary resolve
Just for a moment
Or two
Just until the siren-shriek
Of an incoming missile's presence...

Just until it finds him and stops

Not much to ask
Not much
If anyone
Anything
Is listening

 



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Reviewed by Asa Seeley
Reviewed on November 4, 2012
pawns, that are only human...in the hands of this evil world. sad. thanks for sharing.
asa

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 4, 2012
A poignant view of the futility of war. Why doesn't Bashar al-Assad just step down?



Ron

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on November 4, 2012
you have so well woven the words you choose with a accurate vision of this happening
budd

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on November 4, 2012
What a gift to say so much with so few words.


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