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Color Coordinated Spines

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

It would seem that all socioeconomic levels come with their own unique price to pay.

Friday, November 23, 2012

Color Coordinated Spines

 

As quiet motoring ascends

chauffeur remembrances abound

 

From lesser plans

does this essence come

where once dirt-covered driveway

now adorned by heated concrete

reducing winter's ice to vapor

to pedestal Michelins X

 

Where once scrub oak ran amuck

Gold Hinoki cypress trees line the driveway

embracing switchbacks to the fortress façade

behind rolling hills the Wall Street mote begat

 

Hesitant eyes turn from limo smoked window

to manicured hands folding silk hem over exposed flesh

as if couturiere pampering could insulate the Haves

while peering from bullet-proofed windows at the Have-Nots

 

Bent backs of gardeners

beneath shredded threads of cotton

straighten to smile their faces of pain

to nod what's expected

to nod with requited obedience

to nod for survival

 

The Bentley proceeds

its hubris aglow with

gold flecked adornment

chrome in reserve

maintaining modest gluttony

 

Arched as half coliseum

alike ancient ruin sans crumbling stone

granite storied estate looms above

its extended arms hovering about

the stop

the exit

the entrance

 

Alcove of marble

dotted like chess pieces astray

maid and butler

servant this

and servant that

await their daily fate

 

Ignoring the ceremony

she ascends the grand staircase

he gazes after

same question never answered

 

Retiring to his retreat aka study

he closes the doors

latches tight

stands a moment

finally sliding

back to wall

wall to floor

his slumped respite

eyes fixed on walled library

color coordinated spines

all the classics

all the must reads

all unopened

 

A little girl picks a flowered weed

hands it to hunched back mother

the spade is laid aside

mother and child

 

A smile

A touch

Another reality

 



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Reviewed on December 2, 2012
a heated driveway sounds not like a luxury but, a must (this weekend) and there within lies the confusion. need want want need. To each his own. Hording , mine mine mine. To realize when you have exactly what you need is priceless.

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on November 26, 2012
The initial heated allure of "she ascends the grand staircase/he gazes after/same question never answered," gets dipped in ice....Tableaus of still frames emerge from these lines, amply conveying polarized states of living. You hold the ice next to the flame and it doesn't stand a chance. Some of my very poorest days economically have been my richest ones lived on this earth. You say it much better. ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 24, 2012
You have colored the vivid contrast of inequality. The question remains who deserves and who does not. It's all about power, and often power over other people. Like Richard, I particularly like the idea of the library that is unread.

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on November 24, 2012
A cold unused library. Frightening! There is no accounting for taste in the dungeons of hollywhore and little hope for all her progeny. You are one (I know) whose personal experience is perfectly suited to these insights. Surrounded and adorned by those things the world assigns meaning to. Reminds me of television preachers in certain ways. Your touching summation, Odinsan - the juxtapose - sheds a light on a reality that I can assimilate with effortless ease. Well done!
"color coordinated spines
all the classics
all the must reads
all unopened"
you have conjured a moving metaphor here (IMO) for the superficial, the surface dwellers, the adorned cold (like marble) two-dimensional existence that b hollywood types aspire to. Thankyou for sharing your insights. rlc

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on November 24, 2012
Described with wit and style and accuracy. Those of us at the lower strata can find solace in the observation "A rich person is not the one with the most, but the one who needs the least."

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on November 24, 2012
a very interesting write
budd


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