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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


Articles
· War and Peace

· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


Poetry
· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Gift Card Unsigned

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Many years ago in NYC, for a class assignment, we were required to pick a public location, study a behavior, and imagine where such a behavior might lead. I chose to linger late at night beside a sidewalk florist at 6th and Greenwich Ave. in the Village. There, I observed a purchase being made, paid for with a pocketful of loose change, carefully counted out. Later, the experience became the basis for the character Theo in Echosis--just published. (See my books)

Tuesday, December 4, 2012

Gift Card Unsigned
by Odin Roark

Flowers that never open
are flowers that remain without light
that smother within a rainbow plastic wrap
as if suffocation was their destiny

Petals now lay languid atop a kitchen table
begging to be caressed
to be touched for remembrance
to feel the deep breath that lifts their fragrance
a bouquet remaining unopened
given but received by no one
snap-shot never taken
a never-happened night
forever evoked 


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Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 5, 2012
A marvelous class assignment, and a most powerful slice of life.

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on December 4, 2012
Looks like I'll be reading this book, too. This moving poem is made even better from your introducing the hands that paid for the flowers. It deepens the experience of loss. I love your title, Gift Card Unsigned. These two: "as if suffication was their destiny" and "a never-happened night" . . . carry such significance and pain. ~~ Diana


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