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1+3=1

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Recalling Manhattan brownstone memories à la ‘56, reminds me how little has changed in the solitary world of survival.

Sunday, February 3, 2013

1 + 3 =1

This kitchen's one cup
one spoon
serves one man's fingers stirring
a dollop of cream

atop the counter
3 visiting ants
pass beneath a French Press
seeming separate
seeming alone
seeming aimless
wandering about
our mutual landscape

how barren the cold marble
for those so distant from the nest
that their seeking antennae never touch
never acknowledge one another
assuring reality's connection
all is well

perhaps
until inexhaustible solitude
accepts 1 + 3 = 1
the cup
the coffee
the swirling thinking will continue
stirring darkness to disappear
inviting light's eddying dawn
to reveal the way
patience willing


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Reviewed on February 5, 2013
I think i've somehow been involved in that equation before; one doesn't work without the other. neither less nor more. A complex pause in the mundane. thought provoking piece, enjoyed.

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on February 4, 2013
There is something profoundly pensive about the expansive philosophy latent within the lines of this linear sequential summation. Something about a unity of one which sees the individual united in a larger whole than the sum of its parts might suggest, and then that one whole uniting with another united entity, sometimes known as the Holy Trinity... now that three in one unites with the other one to make the unstoppable, indomitable, insurmountable, indefatiguable, indivsible one to end all ones forevermore... now that's one cup that is running over... (or in German: Ein Stein!) ... but it don't take a genius to see that it all adds up to one hell of a story, and it takes one to know one!

Nice poem, Odin!
Roger

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on February 4, 2013
I like that Budd said the math does work out. I enjoyed the zoom-in, zoom-out of this piece. It would make a great painting. So much is shuffled into this deck, especially stanza three posing a person's identification/equivalation to the ants' situation. Three repetitions of the word "seeming" certainly put a spin on the truth of their 'not' being any of those states. Our favorite theme: oneness. Love the lightening of the coffee, more yin with yang equals gray. ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on February 3, 2013
the math does work out doesn't it
budd

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 3, 2013
I am observing the musing of someone up too early… but not before the ants that have been here before 1950. And three ants make poor company for coffee.

Ron


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