AuthorsDen.com  Join | Login 

 
Where Authors and Readers come together!

Authors | Books | Audiobooks | eBooks | Signed Bookstore | Stories | Articles | Poetry | Blogs | News | Events | Reviews | Videos | Success | Gold Members | Testimonials

Featured Authors:  Gracie McKeever, iM. R. Mathias, iFlo Fitzpatrick, iTodd Cheney, iMORGAN ST. JAMES, iKalikiano Kalei, iAlexander Shaumyan, iJohn Henning, iGary Caplan, iRachel Glasgow, i

  Home > Poetry > Poetry        Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry        Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

Odin odin@aflx.com

 Follow Me  

· 4,268 titles
· 12,669 Reviews
· Share with Friends!
· Save to My Library
·
Member Since: Jul, 2008

   Sitemap
   My Blog
   Contact Author
   Read Reviews



Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


Articles
· War and Peace

· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


Poetry
· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

         More poetry...

Odin odin@aflx.com, click here to update your web pages on AuthorsDen.

Books by
Odin odin@aflx.com











See all Books
by Odin odin@aflx.com


   
  Share   Print   Save   

He Once Wrote

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

A simple ode to the many aged New Yorkers with diaries, but no one to read them.

Saturday, April 6, 2013


Poem Artwork
He Once Wrote

How quickly the vanishing
Where once shone the sun
Now only skyscraper shade

Horse drawn wagons
Once parked below tenement smiles
As rope baskets lowered with coins
Sent back with apples and grapes

Knife sharpening push carts
Their grinding wheels
Ever turning razor sharp edges
Making cheap meat cut special

Tilted fedoras tipped
By cashmere-draped gangsters
Greeted numbers-hungry tenants
While knickered children
Ran their errands for pennies
Warning shop owners
They needed protection

Then...

Came post-war-family-building
Turning wanton streets alive
Baby strollers passed
Job hungry veterans passing
No Help Wanted signs
In slumlord heaven

How precarious his street became
Teetering between shelter and commerce
Preservation and extinction
Wrecking ball and obstinacy

Finally...

Housing Department placed him elsewhere
Nice
He guessed
Missed the old stairs though
Squeaks
Creaks
Scrapes
Sounds and smells
His special friends

Now

Seems little comfort is left
Modern whoosh of elevators
Whirls of air conditioning
Frequent ambulance sirens
Stopping below
Providing the lucky ones
With their last ride

Boredom no more

He once wrote



Want to review or comment on this poem?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 7, 2013
A scene that is unique to New York City. How the changing times have changed the city and the diary writer within. I especially liked that last line.

Ron

Reviewed by Jansen Estrup
Reviewed on April 7, 2013
Too sad and close to home, yet he (she) left us valuable, even vital pieces of herself and it is up to us to be the audience for those who care enough to put themselves 'on the record' ... as all of you do. There should be a national library for diarists (if it isn't a word it should be). Thanks for bringing this (and all the others) diary out of the shadow, Odin.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on April 7, 2013
he once wrote, who will read
budd

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 7, 2013
A sad ode, indeed.

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on April 6, 2013
this is well crafted work, Odin, with
exceptional word choices and phrases...'skyscraper
shade'...'cashmere-draped gangsters' and 'knickered children'
all marvelous;
as much material here as in a Singer or Bellow novel
and with genuine impact

john


New Poetry by Odin odin@aflx.com
hhh