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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Life Atop Death

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Having photographed a boat’s perseverance to stay afloat for the past few years at Gold Beach, Oregon, I’m reminded of how nature offers many opportunities to discover the paradox of life and death.

Sunday, August 18, 2013


Poem Artwork
Life atop Death
by Odin Roark

A fishing trawl freckled by rust
Decaying by salt air and sun
Washed aground many decades past
Still holding to life

Like listening to the breath of nature
Awaiting tomorrow’s sunrise
Where another inch into the sand
Awaits more seeds aloft form shore
Settling upon once polished reflection
Now but mulchified oak and teak
Ready to perhaps nurture a different life

How proud this floating casket
Unwilling to sink into oblivion
Mushrooms luxuriating as offered bouquets
Rising atop the growing mossy knoll
While sprouting weeds where once the captain stood
Stretch skyward in gratitude

Here
Rests the unwilling death
Where once heavy with daily catch awaiting market
Now can only listen
As the next crumbling movement
Bows oceanward
Chanting its ohm of calm
Slowly sinking
But not fallen
Shrinking
But not gone

Would that we might know such peaceful isolation
Waiting for the darkness below
To forgive the oft blinding light above
And exercise the final embrace



  


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Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on August 19, 2013
You have chosen an interesting vessel for your analogy. Although the "hanging on" seems resolute, if this particular boat could be captured via time-laps photography over a period of say, 100 years, the transition from life to death would be mere minutes, perhaps seconds. All too human, the eye that sees in the realm of time meant for man, our glorious lifetimes to be a blink of an eye in the most favorable of cosmic circumstances.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 19, 2013
I was thinking of civilizations built on top of older civilizations. And then I was thinking of the battleship Texas, sinking into Galveston Bay at San Jacinto. Within a hundred years it will be well underwater.

Ron

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on August 19, 2013
so much to consider, so well written
budd

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 18, 2013
Would we could know such peaceful isolation
Waiting for the darkness below
To forgive the oft blinding light above

You provide much to reflect upon via your verses, Odin. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace to you,

Regis


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