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· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Truth is One


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· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

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Hearts of Mind

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

In today’s world, one has to ask often: what price survival? (Image by Lacza)

Tuesday, March 25, 2014


Poem Artwork
Hearts of Mind
by Odin Roark

Peel
Chop
Shred
Savor

So goes the salad of experience
Pieces of organic origin
Most from toxic persuasion

The varied sweet
The acrid sour
Tough skinned resistance
Succumbing to the blade

How swift the cutting motion
From carefully picked beginnings
Life easily becomes peppery
A mustard green spice
Sliced and diced
Into a bowl of bitterness

Agenda schooled
This lancination of guise
Knows a sweet heart
With veins of purity
No match for tangy-spirited acidity
The oak keg redolence
Of a conquer-proven elixir

Oh how delicate and precise
The smooth liquid beginnings
Mere sprinkles
Flirting with palates of want
Quickly smothering Nature’s elements
With the aftertaste
Of gluttony

Struggling hearts of mind
Forever tossed about
While wanting only
To satiate virtue’s hunger

 


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Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 27, 2014
Sliced and diced
Into a bowl of bitterness

I think far too many are being 'cooked' that way today.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 26, 2014
This is not a culinary delight, but it is the only life we have, and somehow we must take the bitter with the sweet and not turn bitter in the end.

Ron

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on March 26, 2014
Lots of flames rose from this page, Odin. From the title and first five lines, a vision of an artichoke heart entered my image-making center: Hearts of Mind..... Oh how I enjoyed: "Life easily becomes peppery." Stanza five brought everything before that around to the social salad which you have prepared here...and "Agenda schooled" already carries its own 'chill,' which is followed with butcher of external appearances. "Lancination: 1595–1605; < Latin lancinātus past participle of lancināre to tear to pieces." I feel my brain developing gout about this. A poem of excellent tapestry. ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on March 26, 2014
so well done with so much written into this
budd

Reviewed on March 25, 2014
Interesting metaphors and reflection about life!

Sandie


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