Live It Or Ditch It
by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com
Putting years behind you tends to cause some leaning toward regrets and fear, but "Live it, or ditch it," was my pappy's shout-out to me about living, and it makes a lot more sense with the years passing and seemingly nothing but blue sky ahead.
Monday, August 4, 2014
Live It Or Ditch It
by Odin Roark
How stealth its presence
Forever concealing surprises.
Reasons of compassion or malice?
My fear or lack of,
Justified or not,
Begs explanation
“I suggest a ‘Hi’ for starters
Having never been formally introduced.
“You know,
Though we gaze at each other over the neighborly fence,
We’ve kinda brought this on ourselves,
The estrangement, I mean.
“We’re like a brotherly
Reality meets imagination moment,
That ‘deer in the headlights’ kind of thing,
And we just stare speechless and embarrassed
As some pretense of serious distraction,
Like pigeons fighting over a French fry.
Or pall bearers hefting
A flower-laden casket
Into a hearse about to
Deliver another future passing
Destroys the moment.
You know what I mean?
It’s all so exhausting,
This waiting around for the future,
When there’s so much good air hangin’ now
Just dyin’ to get sucked up…
Right now.
So…
Like I said,”Hi. Probably time
We got acquainted, eh?”
The estrangement, I mean.
We certainly have, and we've been doing it for centuries.
I believe our modern society is in the process of some kind of change, not seen till now and probably not seen before. A private and internalized culture of isolation? I'm really not sure what to call this evolving phenomenon.
I think you've touched a little on this with your poem Odin. Bob
And, when I'm in waiting rooms for a long wait, I pry people away from their books, the TV, or their cell phone to have been honest-to-goodness conversation.
Ron
enjoyed the read, well said