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Blowing Off Steam

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Even if “The Exercise” is a fluff piece, “a bad Marx Brothers reject” (as one reviewer called it) it still serves a purpose in allowing viewers the freedom of choice to make up their own minds. And for those ready to give it a negative nod, remember there are many who understand there is a very fine line between sanity’s challenge and insanity’s judgment adherents.

Tuesday, December 23, 2014


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Blowing Off Steam
by Odin Roark

Being a little mad is essential,
Otherwise, existing might necessitate a strait jacket.

He wasn’t alone.

Sidewalks were strewn with them,
Whether under-the-bridge encampments,
Or penthouse luxuries,
People were people,
And madness was madness,
And purging was necessary.

How tenuous the steam beneath the lid,
How quiet the whistle at times,
Desiring merely to signal the time
To pour out the contents,
Be it angst,
Or expression needing expressing,
Subjectivity seeking its objective resolve.

Yet…

He thought far too many quash the heat that whistles at them,
Fearful that boiling over might ensue
Instead of merely lifting the pressure,
Pouring the rise-in-heat contents
Into a encapsulation that can be contemplated
As it cools.

His daily ritual of waiting as it becomes sippable,
Reminded him that this little bit of madness
So essential to sanity,
Relied on finding respite in its catharsis.

He understood this momentary going off the rails
Needn’t be a case of judgmental attack
Merely a freedom of opinion exercise, and…
He was okay with being the minority,
Blowing off steam occasionally.
He wasn’t fearful of sanity’s dichotomy.
 


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 24, 2014
From your lead it seems that you have posted this elsewhere to mixed reviews.

I have found that those who tend to, "go off the rails," sometimes have something quite pithy to say. Unfortunately, I find they are often very loud and repetitive, losing the essence of their fine madness.

I like the poem for the truth that it's telling. I guess most people would like to put thoughts like this out of their mind. Are they afraid that they will go there as well?

Ron

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 24, 2014
I've always thought that being a little mad was a good thing for me, but if you listened to my spouse she'd tell you that I'm Totally Mad! (but she says she loves me anyway.)


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