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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· War and Peace

· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


Poetry
· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Exhaustion's Claim Check

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A prosetry conviction, that like the inequities of nightmarish turmoil, insomnia often feeds on unpaid debts as well.

Saturday, February 14, 2015


Poem Artwork
Exhaustion’s Claim Check
by Odin Roark

Life’s downtown storefront.

Guilt’s insomnolence enters beneath temptation’s tinkling bell,
blinks through yesteryears’ clouds of loathsome tears,
and stares as circling shadows bid welcome.

Unclaimed pawns dance seductively like a bargain-dressed chorus line,
gartered legs lifted high knowing well the price desperation pays,
filling the shelves of temporary fixes,
frantic actions to be left behind, but seldom forgotten.

Dust floats heavy through window’s light,
like lingering entrails of candle smoke
dancing the dirge of funeral chatter.
Memory’s fingers search and claw for resolve,
knowing a claim ticket is all that’s needed,
to lift an orphaned cry from exile.

Misfortune’s greedy Shylock steps up to a caged counter,
fingers through his ticketed archives of despair,
toys with insomnia’s claim ticket,
but feigns regret that expired time ran out.

Lament returns to tossing and turning once more,
anticipating tomorrow’s daylight will but conjure up another pawn,
shoring up a bit more of time’s eroding landscape,
hopefully securing a night of repose,
that peace of mind enigma
pillowed deep beneath life’s tradeoffs.


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 15, 2015
Comparing a night's desperate search for sleep to a pawn shop is very brilliant. I just slept in this morning, trying to recover the sleep's deficit of last week where I stayed up too late, stayed awake too much while trying to sleep, and was awakened too early, all part of our mixed up drive for trying to experience everything. While leaving behind much that we may or may not retrieve with a claim ticket.

Brilliant, doubly brilliant.

Ron

Reviewed by Eileen Granfors
Reviewed on February 15, 2015
A cogitation on time and feelings and fate. This is one of my favorites in your compendium of verses.


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