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Dixie Cup Memorial (redux)

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As another Memorial weekend begins, memories of Manhattan’s Washington Square brought images forth that seemed appropriate. It’s easy to forget that Memorial Day is not about the long weekend box office competition. Perhaps now more than ever, given wars have become a continuum, we need to extend even more generosity and thankfulness for the many who have sacrificed.

Friday, May 22, 2015


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Dixie Cup Memorial (redux)
by Odin Roark

How small it is,
this bottom of the Dixie cup,
looking skyward,
holding high the torch,
the unemployment check
of another kind.

Held aloft with no regrets,
half-full,
half-empty,
all the same,
someone had to shoulder the orders.

Now in desert camo-dress,
his hand holds forth,
watching fingers pass over,
some manicured with pennies,
some scabbed and scarred with singles,
even children's innocent fingers
dropping nickels and dimes.

Many have acknowledged this,
his back-home identity,
his calling card,
his shingle,
his name plate.

The mind huddles close now,
few copper and silver,
no blankets of green,
no ingots of gold.

A note floats downward
swathing reality.

“Thank you for your service.
Would you like a job?
What are your skills?
Can you relocate?”

“Sure,” he says,
his eyes upon his severed legs,
each knee protruding,
solitary,
save the Purple Heart pinned securely.

Just let me gather today's windfall, he thinks.
Two pennies,
one nickel,
three quarters,
one subway token.

Relocating again.

Travel.

Enough to get me there.

Pocketing the Dixie cup,
his knuckles pull forward,
surging his mover's dolly,
transporting his hidden hope.

Ahead,
looking back,
his benefactor strides onward,
his missing arm,
yet another lost appendage of honor,
his smile a projection of comradery.

“Not far,” he says…

“Not far.”



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Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on May 22, 2015
With challenging imagery, you express the torment so well ~ we must comfort wherever we can.
Christine xo

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on May 22, 2015
A heart moving, extremely visual, poetic-vignette. How often your past cinematic skills bleed onto the pages of your poetic invention.
Well done... rlc

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 22, 2015
Brought a tear to my eye. Great perception of a nagging problem we have. Accepting what we've done when we send young people of the war and then forget them when they come back except on occasions like Memorial Day and Veterans Day. It's a shame.

It's interesting that the warmongers in Congress are the ones vehement about cutting the Veterans Administration. Is ex-president's going on outings with chosen few once a year or so going to make life better for all? I don't think that charity is the answer.

Ron


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