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· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

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· Truth is One


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· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

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· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

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Love-Precarious

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Once romanticized that “Love Is A Many Splendored Thing,” many chose to dwell on the fantasy of it all, rather than the work needed to overcome its precarious nature. Some of us have been more fortunate than others in the pursuit. (Image by painetworks)

Saturday, January 23, 2016


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Love-Precarious
by Odin Roark

For some
passion’s garden is of carnivorous plants,
saccharine seedlets once resting,
becoming precarious flirtation,
artificial tears destined to betray.

For others,
even accepting the navigation of thorny defenses,
the garden is of edible rapture,
a discovery of that which nurtures love's growth,
the harvesting of passion's nourishment,
the tranquil celebration of emotion's singularity.

How innocently we hoe the rows,
cultivating anticipation
while the pistil's epicurean appetite
patiently welcomes nightfall
and the restful closing of its portals.

And yes,
the garden also knows of dust storms
laying flat once vigorous adventure,
placing thirst upon parched hearts,
leaving only hope for the quench
that an honest teardrop of joy can give.

But still,
imagination offers limited resistance to voracious winds,
a tempest determined to reveal chameleon-like weeds
sprouting upward into the gale
from cauldron-rich soils
invading passion's tenuous resistance,
seducing the trusting gardener in us all.

Inevitably…

One’s need will succumb
at least once to amour’s sleight of hand,
reducing blooms of flowered seduction
to but gathering mulch,
leaving passion reaching up,
asking the unanswerable…
the why of drought,
the way for magic,
the overcoming of love-precarious.

    


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Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on January 26, 2016
Some have trouble accepting love when it knocks on their door. Others,
are vacuous. "Love is a Many Splendored Thing," some do not Know what Splendored means in the long haul of life...your metaphors are beautiful descriptions of Splendor...

Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 24, 2016
A love poem of a highly different sort, counting the ways. You have pointed out the elusiveness of love and it's fickle ways. Boldly truthful in some respects.

She just told me, "I love you," one more time and really means it. Makes me wonder what I've done to deserve such devotion.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on January 23, 2016
Once again, the march of powerful images that strike off the flint of the mind and awakening the imagination to the theme at hand. You have provided an interest take on an age-old problem. Most insightful.

I especially like "tearful of joy"; "leaving passion reaching up", as it always does from its quagmire.

John

Reviewed by ChrisTopher Stone
Reviewed on January 23, 2016
How innocently we hoe the rows...
I wonder how many times one hoes before innocence is lost?


Thanks,
Chris


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