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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Live Snapshots

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Ansel Adams once said: “when words become unclear, I shall focus with photographs. When images become inadequate, I shall be content with silence.” (Image by Pinterest)

Saturday, November 26, 2016


Poem Artwork
Live Snapshots
by Odin Roark
 
Click – Kid time.
 
Waxy paper,
cartooned respite,
chewy pink,
bubbles small,
messes big,
“don't you be blowin' them,
your brows be shaved,”
daunted mother,
stubborn child.
 
Click – Teen time.
 
Driver's license,
double feature drive-in,
windows open,
friends in next car,
cuddle up seats,
brown bagged cherries,
stems to pull,
pits to suck clean,
stomach aches ignored,
paper peeled straws,
blowgun ammo,
shot between cars,
shoring up boredom,
while girlfriend gazes at
Jimmy Dean's red jacket,
up there four stories tall.
 
Click – Grown-up training.
 
Makin' it on his own.
Lonely brownstone.
Central Park always dark.
Mailed letters few,
bill collectors many,
pay or else,
notice this,
notice that.
Oops.

The draft notice.
They say
three squares a day,
see the world,
'til you don't.

Click - Battlefields
 
Dark storms rain down shrapnel,
brain entangled,
sunrise smoke ruined,
nature hides,
evil's time.
 
Click – Post-war
 
Smiles,
smiles,
door to door,
Kirby vacuums rule,
used car,
crazy wife,
crazier life.

Click – Self-pity
 
Jack is good,
Smirnoff bad,
mirrors in front,
noise in back,
cacophonous shoe-worn peanut shells below,
stubby pencil upon napkins write,
verse or prose,
doesn't matter,
rewrapping
neat packages those, 'til…
 
'til glad hand extends,
binds me in different wrappings,
dust jacket dreams,
mailbox stays empty,
only more glad hands,
pay-to-play.
   
Click - Aging
 
One day an old Shep appeared,
squatting neat packages
for me to pick up,
bag and seal,
while we walk the walk,
bark the talk,
shuffle left,
shuffle right, 
staying straight ahead getting harder.
 
Click - Acceptance
 
Aging breath's final neat package,
patiently waits to be wrapped.
 
But until then…
 
Click – He had a few snapshots still in him.


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 27, 2016
Another "stages of life" poem that you do so well. This one focusing on vignettes as snapshots of a life. Well done.

The reason why I put 121 photos in my autobiography. I only wish I had more coverage from parts of my life that weren't photographed.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on November 26, 2016
Like watching a good movie, with all the emotions embedded within "a snapshot." John

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on November 26, 2016

interesting, thought provoking article!!

never stop writing

Reviewed by Albert Russo
Reviewed on November 26, 2016
A wonderful way of covering the different stages of one's life.
So short, but also so effective and touching.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on November 26, 2016
Each line a stark snapshot/vignette. Relate to much of it. Your quote as well struck a chord with me. Writing becomes onerous for me at times. Appropriate images are hard to find, or capture, and, at times don't have the efficacy necessary. But silence/quietude is something I can never find any fault with. In the silence I hear what could never be heard otherwise, and I am always thankful for it. Enjoyed this piece. Peace. r

Reviewed by Edward Phillips
Reviewed on November 26, 2016
Another excellent portrait of life as revealed in a format that you employ so well--with a just due given the camera man as artist. Good choice. I grew up with his work, and with your recollections.

Reviewed on November 26, 2016
How beautifully you wrote this picture album! That's life!! 'Enjoyed!!

Love ya!

Jane


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